This week in class, we have been working on vegetable memes As a part of our maara kai food from the garden work. we had to create our own Memes and here are my creations.
Jessica, these are great. As soon as I read your memes, I started thinking about the story your teacher told me yesterday. In class, some of the students made cakes, but they didn't share what vegetable they had added into their cake. I thought it was hilarious that people who usually didn't like certain foods, devoured the cake that included that particular food. What part of creating memes did you find most enjoyable? ~Mrs Davan~
my favorite part was that I could write and thing I wanted and that I was able to make it completely all by myself. what do You like the most about Memes specifically my own ones? How do you think I could improve?
Hi Jessica, I especially liked the way you have played with the words in your memes. Very cleverly done. Have you thought about the layout of the Grape meme, and how you can make it flow more? Perhaps having the text all on one side, or even lowering the 'a grape day' to make sure it is read correctly. Otherwise, great effort.
No I have not thought about that and thank you for the feedback. When I made it I did think that people would read it wrong but didn't think to lower it. Do you could give me feedback on other one of my post or are you one going to do one?
That's great that you had thought about it. Remember to proofread your comments before posting. Which post would you like me to give you some feedback on? I'm happy to do so.
Jessica, these are great. As soon as I read your memes, I started thinking about the story your teacher told me yesterday. In class, some of the students made cakes, but they didn't share what vegetable they had added into their cake. I thought it was hilarious that people who usually didn't like certain foods, devoured the cake that included that particular food. What part of creating memes did you find most enjoyable? ~Mrs Davan~
ReplyDeletemy favorite part was that I could write and thing I wanted and that I was able to make it completely all by myself.
Deletewhat do You like the most about Memes specifically my own ones?
How do you think I could improve?
Hi Jessica, I especially liked the way you have played with the words in your memes. Very cleverly done. Have you thought about the layout of the Grape meme, and how you can make it flow more? Perhaps having the text all on one side, or even lowering the 'a grape day' to make sure it is read correctly. Otherwise, great effort.
DeleteNo I have not thought about that and thank you for the feedback. When I made it I did think that people would read it wrong but didn't think to lower it. Do you could give me feedback on other one of my post or are you one going to do one?
DeleteThat's great that you had thought about it. Remember to proofread your comments before posting. Which post would you like me to give you some feedback on? I'm happy to do so.
DeleteCould you please Comment on my poster
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